Beautiful poems. I especially liked the first one about dreams. Dreams are very important to a culture and to the people living in it. The last poem was very profound, you may have a point about heaven and hell. It's just a matter of your point of view.
~Sir Scott

My favorite of the three is Asleep In Death, especially the first half. I like the juxtapositions of “sleep” and “wake,” “shroud” and “sight.” The struggle between the words accurately paints a picture of some of what the narrator is feeling, I think.

Wow, these are great! I think my favourite is the second poem. "the fallen arise and the darkness depart" is such an awesome line!

I love the allusions in all three and how you can feel a "jump into something new" as the subject changes. At the same time, it still retains its good vibe at the end.

I guess you could call it... Zaney? ;)

I like this trio of poems, all focused around dreams and death and how they intertwine. You did a really great job here. I like the idea of those lost to hell finding heaven in their dreams. A special bit of mercy.

Perfection...
All three poems were interesting to read because we as humans truly do crave and desire peace, and yet it eludes us.
The word choice was perfect as always, and I especially liked the second one about how each person shines his own line but is unwilling to share it, not knowing how strong a little compromise can make us.
"Hell is just perspective" I agree, sometimes this world is heaven and sometimes hell, but it depends on our situation and how we choose to see the world.

I could go on and on about my interpretations to these poems, but I'll stop now ;)
This collection was amazing and I can't wait to read more from you! :)