I like Ryota. Ryota is funny. Also, this is AWESOME. It's really cool so far! Update soon, yeah?

I'm liking it so far... Interesting, very interesting...

Wow. Just wow. No, not just wow. Wowza is way more appropriate. THIS IS GREAT though I guess I should've expected that from you, heh. I mean, I have absolutely no idea what's going on, but it seems super cool so far.

Beautiful characters.

WHY YOUR CHAPTERS BE SHORT.

Well, they're taking it pretty calmly actually. I would panic since there isn't any internet.
And Carlos made a bad assumption. Who says it can't be a guy? If I transported a bunch of teenagers to a parallel world, that would probably be my response so that they think I'm weird.

I like Ryota. He's a nerd. And Soul is actually pretty calm.

WOOT WOOT WOOT NEW CHAPTER.
Alright. I like the new character introductions. It's a nice setup. Now if you would JUST WRITE THE DANG STORY.

WOOOOO AND UPDATE.
I found an error. You said "that is" instead of "that it."
Okay, since you asked for an actual review, I'll leave one. But besides that one error, I really didn't see anything. I like how you added tidbits about the characters to develop who they were beforehand. The situations and their thought process are pretty nice. Now I can't wait to see how you'll link them all together.

Woooooo NEXT CHAPTER YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY. I love the character descriptions. The names are good as well. I like Ryota the best; I kinda identify with him.

You should continue the story n it was good

WOOTWOOTWOOTWOOT
So good. MOAR.