|Reviews for The Endless Desert|
| cd11 chapter 1 . 12/2/2017
| SimonClemens chapter 1 . 6/30/2017
Very nice, although I would format it so his thoughts are more separate from the regular text.
| RaptureRaptor chapter 1 . 4/12/2017
Well done! I like the pacing, the descriptions are detailed enough to give a fair view of what is going on, though I would prefer a better layout of where people are in relation to one another and other objects inside a room. Originally I thought this was going to be a Dark Tower spinoff, and though it has some of the trappings I'd say it's different enough to stand alone. I look forward to the next chapter, and more on the politics of this world you've created!