|Reviews for Forgiveness|
| Tweety chapter 1 . 11/13/2016
#sillybooklover1712 good attempt upon writing. But the spark is yet missing.
| Myworldbooks chapter 1 . 11/10/2016
A potpourri of ideas about forgiveness very beautifully presented by using the art of language.. Proud of you dear writer... You can do wonders...
The world's waiting for you to come in form and spread your light...
May god bless you..
| Yourmine chapter 1 . 11/9/2016
Wonderful! Jzt became ur fan aftr reading it!
Keep it up.. May u become a great writer in the coming future...
| I3books chapter 1 . 11/8/2016
You have made a commendable effort in presenting your ideas about forgiveness. However, the choice of your words can be better as your ideas seem to be local due to the quality of your words. You can do much better.
All the best!
| Ranger35 chapter 1 . 11/8/2016
There's nothing new to what u have writeen... A simple elementary school essay where you have copied words from Portia's speech of the merchant of venice by William Shakespeare... He had been accused of having stolen ideas and feel that you are also following his footsteps.. Rise up dear..
| Amazing18 chapter 1 . 11/7/2016
Your thoughts are par beyond what normal beings can actually think. I just pray that you do practice what you have preached. Please continue your writing so that your noble thoughts can be conveyed to the humanity.
lots of love
| sillybooklover1724 chapter 1 . 11/7/2016
| Bzzbird68 chapter 1 . 11/7/2016
More people need to read is something we all can benefit from.