Reviews for Cinderella
Ragsweas chapter 1 . 4/30/2017
Interesting start...Really looking forward to read more!
debjani.halder23 chapter 1 . 4/18/2017
"Wisdom but more creativity"? You're randomly humanatizing Time and then trying to detach it. Its there. Always waiting and watching. Moving steadily forward for backward has no place for time though it exists eternally and at all times, for it is Time. It knows all and it knows now. It knows possibilities and choices.
You said "rolling" waaay too many times. Technically, we should say that Time waited and knew of the traveller because she went to what had already been. She made a new possibility for time. But time also went on at that moment so time should know of what has already been.
Re read it. Stop making Time talk like human. Like a normal person. The personality is good though.
ragsweas chapter 1 . 4/17/2017
Interesting start...nice touch of time narration...would love more...update soon!
Anwesha Karmakar chapter 1 . 4/17/2017
Its just too awesome! The usage of such beautiful words made my day! I must say that u r really talented and hope u can achieve your dreams!