Reviews for I Know This Sounds Crazy
sassysuri chapter 1 . 11/18/2016
I think the concept is really cool, but I would have been amazing if you ventured further into the idea of the painter coming alive. What did he feel exactly? Why does he feel that way? What caused him to feel that way?
Though the short way of speaking is something that can be used in writing, you should try to tell more. You leave the reader with so little that they don't have quiet enough to ponder. Be adventuresome and see what you can say about this experience.
It has potential to be amazing. :)