Reviews for Popular Girls are not always Bullies!
rando99 chapter 1 . 12/14/2016
nice! i love the message ur conveying!
Myriem chapter 1 . 12/9/2016
This was really short and sweet. I'm amazed at how you've managed to give us such a lovely moral to your story in such a short amount of words! Everything was really impactful, and I love how it teaches us not to judge a book by its cover, and that stereotypes are often wrong. I really liked this. Well done c:
BradytheJust chapter 1 . 11/17/2016
Wow!
Well if I were your English teacher this story would get an A plus! :D This story was wonderful!
You set up the characters, the conflict, and Melanie's internal conflicts with herself and the stereotypes the school environment can force on her.

Awesome job and this story could be published all its own! :D
LorrahBear chapter 1 . 11/17/2016
I enjoyed the message. It is always best to be kind, no matter whether you're popular or not. :)

There were a tense consistency issues, so I'd suggest looking at that, and maybe try to break up that extra-large paragraph roughly in the middle, but overall, nice job.