Reviews for I See
sassysuri chapter 1 . 11/18/2016
You create a very good mystery vibe. I am interested to know the full story of the staring girl and the history with the person looking at her. You could try telling a little more of the two's histories, but overall it is very strong. You could also try being a little more "poetic" in your words as in you should try to be more descriptive in you images, which are very important to this piece.
Very good and let me satisfied. Keep up the good work. :)