Reviews for Wanderer in the Caves
BradytheJust chapter 1 . 11/19/2016

This story was beautiful Brievel! Absolutely beautiful. I liked the idea of a sword that could cut through only metal, and how a stone knife could sever the chain.

You captured not only the emotions of being trapped and forced to live in the darkness but also the hope they felt as they fled. "The kiss was soft and sweet as a butterfly's touch." Magical word choice!

Great job and keep it up )