I was so happy to be able to follow more of the story from ao3 and I hope that we find out the ending one day ️

I would pay so much for this story to be finished and published, it was amazing, the realism, the characters, everything. Also the story was left in a very bitter part, i cant be happy after this jsbdwkv. Please, I wish you could keep writting this novel (also broken bottles) I've also finished almost every story you have in ao3 (under the name of deathsdoll, just in case someone doesn't know) I dont know if you chek the new comments in this site, but just in case, thank you for your awesome stories , you are amazing 3

...it's been 4 years, 4 long years of checking to see if you updated this amazing story. While I am grateful to re-read it as my hopes for a great ending nearly die out - please for the love of all, understand how much your readers are *deeply* invested in this story. Against all reason, I still hope for new chapters to appear. Please LET OUR HOPES NOT BE IN VAIN and return the story to us

This is my favourite story on this whole website! I really hope it will be completed one day. I absolutely love the relation between Sarah and Alice and Megedagik.

Alice: he will grow up to be a fearsome warrior like his father, killing many people and raping many white women.

Also Alice: these people aren't savages.

Their revenge is understandable, but let's not pretend that good people murder and rape. Savages do, no matter their skin color.

(Oh, and getting female prisoners of war pregnant is a well known tactic used throughout history, and all over the world, because it is known that most women will not attempt to flee and will suffer much if it means staying with their child/children.)

This story is basically one long, slow descent into Stockholm Syndrome

Personally I loved the build up. But I also always prefer a story with solid character development over a story filled to the brim with smut at the cost of getting to know the characters.

The downside is that I’m super attached to the characters now and am really afraid for them…it’s so interesting reading POVs from both the British and the Powhatan. The white men are entitled to their grief and anger…but I also understand why the Powhatans did what they did and if anyone has a right to their anger, I’d say it’s the Native Americans. . Not to mention, I know what happens to the Powhatan people, historically, so my natural inclination is to want them to have the upper hand in this story. I don’t want Alice and Sarah to return to the colony, but I especially don’t want their lovers to get murdered. Gahhhhh! The trepidation is REAL, let me tell you.

“She had a very pretty voice.”

I’m GUTTED.

You’re killing me with this story. Where is the crying emoji with its heart being stabbed repeatedly with a knife when you need it!?

For some reason I am unable to login to my account from my phone. But I’m one of your A03 readers (NiniJune) and I just can’t stop binging these new stories that I didn’t know existed until a few days ago.

Sometimes when I’m emotional..I like to watch this scene in Last of the Mohicans (specifically Alice and Uncas )
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I know it’s a different setting and a different tribe…but reading this story feels like I’m reading an in depth AU version of Alice and Uncas and I am just…gorging myself on it. I can’t get enough.

The level of research you must’ve done for all of your historical fictions is BEYOND IMPRESSIVE. I already knew I loved your other works but I’m equally as in love with these! You’re…a fucking bad ass. Not that I didn’t already know that. But, holy shit. I keep finding myself perpetually blown away… by the range of your work… and all the little details…and the depth of your world-building… and the character development…it’s SO impressive, I find myself at a loss for words.

I hate Sarah and Ahote needs to come around, please. Please please update, please

Also I hate Sarah for stealing Alice's baby

I hate Alice's sense of duty to her faith, like leaving behind a child that's just- no words- at least she finds out about the attack this way

I actually hate this. Why is Alice being such a fucking dumbass I hate her but I need Hassun to be happy so please let them be together.

I know its been two years since you've updated and you're prolly very busy with life and stuff, I hope that's the case and nothing bad has happened but on the off chance that you do read this I need you to know that I need to know what happens at the end, I really truly want Alice to get a happy ending with her savage lover even though it is suggested Hassun dies, I have read this incomplete piece thrice now and I can't handle not knowing anymore please just end my misery.
Ps. I love you and your work

Alice

Definitely Alice :D 3