I think Alice is bipolar. First she doesn’t want to be parted from Megedagik’s children and begs him to let them live with them- she couldn’t face another loss. Says she couldn’t face losing any more children, still sees little William’s skull crushed but can just leave a child she gave birth to, and his little face doesn’t haunt her? Leaves all them out of duty to Lawrence? Who she has not seen in two years? I always thought Sarah was the dumb one. Alice is just an uptight narrow minded Puritan hag. And Magedagik keeps taking her back, she forgives him then takes it back repeatedly. She is outraged and then forgives over and over again. She needs to take some responsibility for HER actions!

I can not side with Alice in this. She did live her son.

Ahhhhhhhh my heartttttt. Keep up the good work, hun.
Love,
:)

Thank You so much for another great update! I truly love and look forward to this story.
I understand where both parties are coming from, I do believe it is both naive an unreal for Alice to believe she can disappear for one year and when she comes back everything will be just like it was, especially when everyone believed she would not be returning. Alice needs to realize she was wrong and she hurt many in her decisions and that they changed because of that.
As for Sarah, honestly I still find her so immature and annoying, no matter how many things she has been through I feel as though she hasn't really gotten anything out of it. Like come on woman, she was your friend who supported and defended you through your toughest times, she explained to you why she couldn't stay or take her baby, and now that she's back you hate her for loving HER OWN baby! Seriously, I'm just done with Sarah, she's pointless at this point for me. I really love Mansi, and I hope Ahote comes around. I miss the happy family. I'm not too sure how I feel about Alice keeping the white baby. It just doesn't feel proper.

Oh, I hate that Sarah and Alice aren't getting along. I'm sure you have a purpose for the discord and tension, but I hope it is resolved soon.

Giddy about this update! I get that Sarah is upset, but c'mon, that is not her child and she's expecting soon. Her words were pretty cruel. I'm on Alice's side with this one. Love that Megedagik isn't backing down either.

Oh my! This chapter made me cry! Thank you for sharing!

Ahh typos! Sorry ( my 2 year was trying to take the phone from me) I meant to say, IF you finish the story it would be amazing :) I know life can be busy, hectic and sometimes uninspiring. I didn’t mean to come across so rude in that typo! Sorry!

Just want to say that I have binged this whole story the in two days...and been finding myself reading it over and over agin! Your characters are so memorable and your writing really brings them to life. It’s a story where I easily become lost in and find myself wondering about throughout the day. I’m not sure what your plans are but it includes finishing this story. Seriously cannot say how much I love it! Thank you, seriously, thank you!

It is a rare but precious thing to find a story that you, at once, love it with so much of your heart there's nothing left of it to spare AND hate it with such severe fervor you begin to curse in unknown languages flowing from rage. And I willingly subjected myself to this masterpiece of love-hatred for years. YEARS in absolute sublime and tortured agony at this love story, the fate of the characters, the arc of the storyline, the best couple arguments ever detailed in writing etc I could on, I love it all to the gritty gritty that you write so well the characters feel like living people instead of lines.

And I'm so fucking grateful. You have put my heart in a garbage disposal, and then you've magically sewn it back together simply because you're a brilliant goddess of writing, which would be the only logical explanation as to why I love you-hate you and I'm also thanking for causing me physical pain at times lol INNER TURMOIL really seems to encompass the bulk of my experience with this story. However, coupled with soaring hopes of wild hearted abandon...In a nutshell, you've ruined my life with your creation of one of the greatest love stories of all time because I'm insatiable.

PLEASE continue this saga, this is far from over and we are starving for more

Can one person be at once so happy and in so much pain at the same time?
WE YOUR FAITHFUL READERS ARE LIVING PROOF 3

I'll be re-reading until the next installment is released upon us

Only hate you a lil bit, and love you a lot...mostly ;)

I really love that you dig into their insecurities now that they've been reunited. I honestly am relieved; all of her thoughts and concerns were very genuine - and it really added to the story.

This was a GREAT chapter. I do feel like you're an extremely detailed writer, and this chapter felt like it was missing some of the in-depth detail you always bring - but it might just be in my head(please don't hate me - I literally love everything you write, but I also want to be honest with you ). I love this story - I love Alice and Hassun's story. I can't wait to see your next update!

P.s. at the beginning I would have felt bad for Lawrence, but he sucks. I'm team Hassun 100%!

Thank you for the quick update. I'm so happy that Alice is finally back with Megedagik, I have been waiting for this to happen for a long time.

I absolutely love this story but i find Alice very frustrating like woman can't you make up your mind already you're hurting everyone being half assed about everything. It may seem cruel but i wish she wasn't having Lawrence's child.

Big sigh of relief! Finally they are reunited! Now to work out all the messy little repercussions of her time away. I hope she is honest and tells him her feelings. Bummed that she's pregnant. Great chapter.

Noooo they met and didn't realize it! I am hoping Megedagik will be there to save Alice. I just want to see Alice reunited with her kids.