I still think Alice will get her revenge on the native who killed her son and let's just say it's not going to be pretty.

This was a great update! I really love all of the detail you apply to the characters and their situations. Stories are all too often ruined by the author rushing from one dramatic scene to the next, but you provide so many opportunities to learn about the characters and see their reactions and growth. I am officially hooked on this story!

Glad you changed the name to Pajackok. It makes it easier to keep the men separate. Since most of us are unaccustomed to these names the similarity before made it hard for me to remember which one was which.

I'm happy to see this story back up. I can't wait to find out what happens. I'm really interested in what happens to Alice, i think her story will be very interesting.

This got dark and I can't wait to see for what's in store for Alice and Sarah. Will Alice go crazy and seek revenge for the death of her son?

Sorry to see the original deleted, but it's your story and you know how you can best bring it to life in the way you imagine. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

And here I was thinking William would live! Dang. Still brutal and if course now Sarah and Ahnu haven't met so I'm wondering how they will! Maybe he'll save her from the other guy. Still would've liked if they met first like the original, but can't wait to see what happens (and maybe you'll write her story with tweaks or so!) just keep writing haha

Yay the story is back! Although I'm sad it won't have Sarah's story; I was super interested in reading her story- maybe you'll write her story from her point of view? But still looking forward to this one. You have no idea!
I feel this is going to be so sad since there's more Lawrence and William ack I feel I know what's gonna happen. Again!

This chapter has so many feels it actually made me cry.