|Reviews for Breath of Life|
| Sonnet Of A Spirit chapter 1 . 12/30/2017
Girl, you came back in 2016? Yaaaaas! Made my last day in 2017 a happy day. Happy new year, hope life is treating you well. Would love to read some more of your stories in the future. Bye for now xXx
| AV chapter 1 . 12/15/2017
Welcome back! I realize I'm a year late to this update, but I hope you get to read this. I also pop back here every couple years or so to reread KnR.
I like this new style of writing, and the inclusion of Japanese elements. I think it can even be used in certain parts of longer storytelling, to break monotony. :)
PS. If you are inclined to write that sequel with Sun and Nakamura now (or even just a short story after KnR!), I am ever your patient reader
| Aki chapter 1 . 12/19/2016
Couldn't believe it when I saw an update XD
It's certainly been a while, I remember reading KnR years ago!
Really enjoyed the one shot (kind of sad it is one though) and the way you've adapted it in Japanese mythology was amazing.
Hope I see u back on FP sometime again :)
| LethargicLove chapter 1 . 12/12/2016
This was such an unexpected surprise! While I happily read up whatever you post in , it had been so long since I had seen an update from you on Fictionpress that I was confused and thought I had mistakenly gotten two emails.
Although I know a lot about Greek and Roman mythology, I had never read about Eros and Psyche. Really enjoyed this, so I proceeded to read up on the myth. Now I can't wait to see how you plan on portraying the trials Psyche has to overcome.
Side note: Ten years later I am also still holding strong for Nakamura and Sun, haha. Just finished re-reading KnR for what has to be the tenth or so time. I hope life is treating you well.
| SmokingEngraved chapter 1 . 12/11/2016
yayyy I've missed your writing, thank you for uploading this beauty 3
| incognitus chapter 1 . 11/29/2016
Good to see you back on FP! I really liked this new one-shot - it's clear that while your writing style has remained largely the same (from your "Koibito no Ryu" days), you've also matured in terms of word choice, succinctness, and grasp of grammar. Great use of the various scenes to develop the plot. :)
By the way, out of curiosity, do you have any plans to do a sequel for Sarea and Tentei? I must confess that I miss them quite a bit and still pop in every now and then to re-read their story.
| ClosetReader chapter 1 . 11/27/2016
Oh. The end note was informative and the story was an interesting look into mythology. I'm so glad that you're back on this site to write. Still excitedly waiting for the sequel of Koibito no Ryu!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
What a surprise to find a fictionpress update on my account after so many years. You write as beautifully as ever!
| sappyromancelvr chapter 1 . 11/24/2016
I love your stories so much. Sad that this is a one shot cause I'd always love to see more from of these two! Seems like such an interesting world to explore. Hope you're doing well in real life :)
| Bubbly Girl chapter 1 . 11/24/2016
I really enjoyed reading this! I've always loved Greek mythology but what I really liked here is how you fused the two cultures together!
| Kyranol chapter 1 . 11/24/2016
Wow, it's been forever! Great to see that you're still alive on this site :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2016
This is great! (and I am glad to see you posting again)