|Reviews for The Dragon and the Clumsy Hunter|
| Syluk chapter 1 . 5/26/2017
Hahahaha, that was brilliant! Loved it :) I liked how Fafnyr talked - you could feel his intelligent in every word, and Sans... well, smart enough to not repeat himself too many time, at least xD
Thank you for the laugh!
| BradytheJust chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
Another amazing piece of work by you! :D
Fafnyr's personality is so different than what I see Dragon's as, but it was entertaining! Having the hunter be clumsy and awkward made the encounter a bit scarier because I seriously thought Fafnyr would just lose his temper and eat him!
Your word choice was excellent and the story was entertaining! I want to see more! Keep it up!