Reviews for Divine Contract
BloodOfAValkyrie chapter 1 . 5/8
It's interesting but some of the wording is somewhat awkward and using the *action* style brings the writing down as it interferes with the flow of the text. When you introduce anything, whether it be a character, a place, or an item, try not to explicitly tell all the details. Use the 'show not tell' rule. For example if I was describing myself, instead of saying I have pale skin, I would say I have fair skin despite living on the coast etc.
Hope this helps and u can't wait to read more.
~Valk
DemigodessOfEternity chapter 7 . 4/14
Great job! I enjoyed this!
Vazza chapter 4 . 1/10
Enjoying this story. Look forward to find out what happens next :)
Angela Dumbarton chapter 3 . 1/9
Very good, can't wait to read the next hope it comes soon.
jeremy1555 chapter 1 . 12/1/2016
Don't do it!