Reviews for Him Over Me?
LunaxNight chapter 1 . 12/3/2016
Wow, that was really good! I love your writing! Keep it up! :)
Fib112358 chapter 1 . 12/2/2016
A nice poem with good rhymes, linking the start and the end was also a good touch. Poor girl, wanting to be spanked, having a father who spanks, yet never gets spanked.

One improvement is that I've found its best to add something like between stanza to make the poem easier to read.

Again, well done.