Reviews for The Porcelain Murderer
katelyn chapter 16 . 1/2
wow ok tom try and contain a little less self-loathing idk and maybe you'd feel better gosh

i really liked this chapter because a) dialogue on point as usual, i got a real kick out of the 'so, i'm going to be honest, you look awful' line. it me. b) ryan. c) ryan AND thomas. d) i like that tom thinks he's fooling anyone into believing he doesn't have a heart melting crush on riocard martinez idk. e) 'because i'm a dad. it's kind of a dad thing, i guess' my dad senses r tingling

i think that the rest of the story should just be ryan and tom interacting. that's fair right.

update soon.

-katelyn
Shade the Viridescent chapter 15 . 12/26/2016
Oh christ the torture stuff is so hard to read. I think I actually skimmed it bc I saw some key words and went 'nope I am about to go to bed I do not need this in my life'. So it's more of a vague horror for me right now. And god, this is just gonna screw Thomas up so bad. Huzzah for Harper! Coming in clutch with the saving from the cold and the not asking too terribly many questions beyond establishing safety and necessity for medical attention!

Also I am SO MAD (but not really) for that Ryo ficlet bc it has TAINTED Ryan for me. TAINTED I TELL YOU

Thanks for updating, chica, please do so again soon~
~Latni
Shade the Viridescent chapter 14 . 12/26/2016
i love oliver he is my favorite i am sorry i didn't review the last chapter and this isn't really a review but i needed to say that ok i will leave a proper review on the next chapter
~Latni
Team Kaitlyn chapter 15 . 12/26/2016
let me preface this with the following statement:

aaaHhHhHhaaHh

i am so fucking pumped about this because LOOK AT THEM ALL INTERACTING! I love that we included each other's characters in our rewrites because it adds depth and makes our transitions easier when we coauthor again BUT ALSO BECAUSE I GUILTILY LOVE SEEING YOU WRITE MY CHILDREN, IT IS AN AFFLICTION I WILL NOT APOLOGIZE FOR

also I'm really sorry for Thomas having these awful hallucinations because damn son, kid is already messed up, doesn't really need anymore, but whatevs

also I was feeling really happy and frisky and good until I fucking read that torture stuff. At least I wasn't eating scalloped potatoes again.

Best bit: "Can Mrs Cece open hers? I picked it out, Mrs Cece, but I let them put their names on it, too, so it's 'from all of us', but really it's from me. Just me. Not them."

my baby has attitude

-katelyn
Team Kaitlyn chapter 14 . 12/25/2016
its ok tom, i drool too. also i love that he was laying in their laps and i'm real jealous that tom was getting a nice hair rub from penny. if sOMEONE would give me hair rubs, i would be so pleased.

i'm really worried abt tom's dreams. i hope that he gets better, but i know you, and i know that he's not going to, so don't know what i'm expecting

CAN'T WAIT FOR HIM 2 SEE HARPER BUT SINCE U WONT LET ME HAVE IT:

best bit - penny asking if he was going to kill himself. don't ask.

-katelyn
Team Kaitlyn chapter 13 . 12/25/2016
i really loved this chapter and now i'm suffering

honestly what i loved the most was the development of tom and rio's friendship and omg, he loves him he loves him he loves him and the coLD FEET ON THE BACK I'M CRYIN. i hope that his chest heals, and i super appreciate that rio covers for tom bc like

cece

love u

but ur boy just needs to suffer alone for a lil bit

also 'here i was thinking it was because you grew to be six hundred feet tall and you almost smothered me every time you rolled over' is my favorite line in the entire universe. how tall does he think ryan is

gr8 chapter post another one ok love u

-katelyn
Shade the Viridescent chapter 12 . 12/24/2016
*pterodactyl screech* what's better than this boys bein dudes and emotionally supporting each other and cuddling and talking (at least mostly) honestly about their feelings i love this

thanks for updating, please do so again soon!
~Latni
Shade the Viridescent chapter 11 . 12/24/2016
Poor Thomas... I love the bit about coping with anxiety by putting it all in a box and pushing it away for later. That's how I deal with most of my negative emotions too! :D Also, this chapter is really great at ramping up the tension. Thomas isn't exactly the most reliable narrator, but I'm still inclined to believe that there's some other crap going on and that this isn't just in his head. That being said, it's written so that it's really hard to tell. Nicely done~ *thumbs up*

Thanks for updating, there's another one so I'm gonna go read that now!
~Latni
Team Kaitlyn chapter 12 . 12/20/2016
I imagine that you are Thomas in this chapter and that I am Rio, because I can absolutely see you hugging me and me being appropriately astonished TBH

I love them and their relationship and while I was vomiting last night I was also crying because rio described the 'wanting the hurt to be over' and boy do I identify

TOM U R GOOD AND I LOVE U SO MUCH OK BE SAFE AND RUN FROM THE CATS

best bit: 'I feel like a butterfly has landed on me'. Same Rio. Same.

-katelyn
katelyn chapter 11 . 12/18/2016
how to dedicate your soul to satan - a novel by thomas michael keits

i'm actually fucking laughing in between my emotional pleas for thomas' safety. he's such a big old baby, he has so many problems. i just want to give him a big ol snuggle bug. but for real i honestly look at him and see myself and damn, man, i get it tom

here's hoping he ok

xo katelyn
Shade the Viridescent chapter 10 . 12/17/2016
Thomas is me and I am Thomas and I love him so MUCH. I also love that he has already accepted that he's gay? Not that I don't enjoy those slow burn realization fics, but it's nice to have that out of the way. Plus it allowed for the delightful interaction between him and Penny. :D

I also love and appreciate Penny. Everyone is wonderful except Kozonush. :D
Katelyn chapter 10 . 12/15/2016
"You're as gay as a two dollar bill, do you ever think straight?"

ive read a lot of sentences in my life but i have to say this one is my favorite

jfc penny, you're slaying me

ALSO PENNY AND THOMAS BONDING HELL YES HELL YES ALL RIGHT HELL RIGHT that's the shit I like to SEE

I really appreciate that she ain't afraid to call him on his emotional disabilities because that's the kind a friend a person who doesn't know how 'happy' works needs in their life

update more or else

-katelyn
Shade the Viridescent chapter 9 . 12/14/2016
Ahhhh ok I am the worst but I finally caught up and UGH Kozonush is so creeeepy. Gah. Although I do love the image of Collins in a little Christmas kitty outfit for so many reasons. :'D anyway thomas ilu you are perfect and complicated and such a mess

THANKS FOR UPDATING please do so again soon sorry i'm the worst *heart*
~Latni
Katlyen chapter 9 . 12/12/2016
"Still, there was his plan, and then there was the irrational impulsive part of his brain that forced his body to make terrible choices. And that part of his brain was apparently much stronger and louder than his rationality, no matter how much he was forced to be the voice of reason between his friends."

That's the greatest paragraph I've ever read Tbh like welcome to the party tom glad u dropped by

anyway I'm bitterly disappointed that Kozo isn't being NICER TO HIM because you and I BOTH KNOW HE WOULD HAVE BEEN GOOD, KAITLIN

HE WOULD HAVE TRIED

he needs to work a little on the 'not being a creepy tall man' but honestly, he's good, $3 has a cat, who doesn't love cats?

can you tell I'm rambling because I'm upset can you because that's what happening

Update immediately or face my wrath

-katelyn
Team Kaitlyn chapter 8 . 12/11/2016
i'm cryin man y u gotta play me like this

i love tom and rio so much i love them and i love how tom makes fun of how young rio is bc its cute and im DYING sotP

this story makes me so sad i've missed it so much holy mother fuckin shit

-k8lyn
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