Reviews for Between
Tapp chapter 16 . 3/3/2017
As interesting and eventful as this story is, it never felt like the characters were truly under any threat. Whenever Silas suspects Wren to be something she's not, it never felt like it needs to be taken seriously partly because we already know to a certain extend who she is (and vice versa). And since Wren lacks any sort of affliction with Silas, any consequences (shall any side get what they're after) doesn't feel like it would affect the other much. Maybe it's simply that we don't know much of their motivations yet...
Still, it is well edited and worth a read. Keep it up!