This story is SO GOOD! It's everthing you want in a story, just like its characters (Zane and Ana) it's a mix of sweet, mysterious, dark, funny. I love it so much that I read it in one day instead of stuyding for my exams and I dont regret one bit.
I hope you update soon

how do I explain how I feel about this chapter with out sounding like a crazy person... oh wait I am crazy but lets try doing this properly.

first off there was a small mistake near the beginning of the chapter. nothing big.
second, she has magic, I didn't see that coming. I did wonder if she had something special but I wasn't expecting magic so well done.
third, Zane reminds me of a moody teenager. it is quite funny. I do love him though...

I'm sorry that is as proper s you are going to get. love love love it

uh ... hold the phone.. what on earth. what is going on with the crystal? tell me tell me tel mee... I'm sure I will find out. Zane is so cute its adorable.

OH MY GOD SCREW THE REST OF THE CHAPER! I DONT CARE ABOUT THAT. I LIKE THE LAST BIT. YES I AM PRETTY MUCH SCREAMING THIS IM MY HEAD. I am surprised I can even get words out. oh my god my god oh my god. oh. my. god. woah. eek! I actually not sure what to say. this was pure yumm yumm. yummy yummy yumm yumm eek! I'm so excited right now I feel oh I don't know eek! I COULD HUG YOU SO TIGHT IT WOULD HURT. I'm am ready to bounce off the walls. this was soo good. there were a couple of mistakes in there but I don't care. I LOOOOOVE love Love the ceremony. but like I said before it felt a little fat. I'm sure since the last chapter its been a little while but just seems to have jumped from oh no broken to oh yay all fixed now. but I think my excitement just tells that thought to find a hole and die. why didn't you tell me this chapter existed last night. I would have kept reading right until like 3 am. it was bad enough I woke like a zombie this morning but if I knew this was here I would have kept reading. why didn't you tell meeee! this was so good. why is no one reading this but me! seriously read it people. I might be bias but this is just pure gold. its so light heartedly sweet but some how dark and dangerous all at the same time. and I cant stop typing I'm sure I am rambling. yay!

eeek! eeek! eek! eeek! my mental voice is screaming my man I sgiving me strnge looks from te face I am pulling and the words I am tpying. oh my god that was... weird but oh my good I don't know what to say. why is it I get so incoherent from just reading this, I haven't done that in a while. my mind and mouth are completely out of sync. it is crazy and sooooo good.

no! poor Ana. I really feel for her. to 'lose' the man she loves so much and I not know if he is alive or not, well he cant be he had his head cut off but in a way he is alive, he is immortal.

I kind of like the way this chapter is written and kind of don't. its very confusing which help put you in the mind of Ana and how she is feeling but it is also kind of hard to follow at the same time.

would you believe that for this whole chapter my mind kept thinking of Zane and I just wanted him to pop up and kill Knight poopypants. I really dont like him. stupid man.

Oh my god you did not just do that! Like seriously I don't know what to do cry or scream or both or just not type. Oh my god what do I do. Zane. You killed him. With a simple knight. Oh strange question when is this set I'm a little confused is not a post apocalyptic era or just a twisted version of reality?

Back to freaking out! Oh my gooood nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo whhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy would you do this to meee I like what the hell. I'm not even conversing properly. I can't form proper sentences in my head. You killed him you killed Zane. You killed him I know he is immortal but you killed him.

Whyyyy I will be here all night typing my utter disbelief soooo yeah ... wow

That's was hit and then crazy and amazing and hit all at the same time. Zane is just so. I'm not sure of the right word. Amazing sure but he is something else and it kinda makese want to cuddle him and love him. Hmmm

My first reaction to this chapter and I quote 'She did not just friend zone him?!' I was a little shocked stupid woman. But on the other hand my heart is weeping at how sad and amazing this is all at the same time. I'm like a 5 year old at Christmas

Oh I'm meant to be going to bed but I just can't stop reading! This is just pure gold how could no one want to tell you how good this is? So many emotions I don't know how to react.

Zane is mine. :) I own him. Ana can go away ;) in the nicest possible wording

Imagine fan girl screaming. That's me. X1000 why didn't she let him kiss her but then in the water. That was amazballs.

That vow needs to go right now! I don't like it ;p I know it's here to stay but now they won't get up to anything gun. It's not fair. I guess I will have to read to find out. Such a hassle Actually isn't I'm just kidding

I'm quite happy to announce I am your first reviewer. First off I was intrigued the minute I read the summery so I'm a little perplexed why this isn't getting any reviewer but I have the same issue.

I like it. It's light hearted where it needs to be and slightly more serious when needed. Well done. Onwards I got to decide if I like it. I probably will. I like Zane all ready. You might have nabbed yourself a fan.