|Reviews for What They Said|
| MTveit chapter 1 . 3/6/2017
Holy shit, this poem is so good! I got chills reading this part:
I said, ''I wanted to die.''
They said, ''Well, boy, do it right.''
Can't believe how many different emotions this poem brings out. All I can say is good work, and thank you for posting this.
| sometimes i like 2 write chapter 1 . 12/20/2016
Fuuukk this is good. I was reading it and I was a little freaked out cause it's depressing and shit and so I was like I dunno... cautious about it as I read and like in the middle there was like a bit of clumsy rhyming but lol I wouldn't know, I'm not a pro poet or whatever... we all wish to be, huh? But anyway, this was so good! I don't know if this is your story or someone else or if it's straight from your imagination, but I'm guessing it's your story? The ending was perfect. Depressing, and hopefully not true, but perfect. I loved this poem. It was dark and depressing, yeah, but it brings light onto depression and how bad it can be. :) good job and if this is your story about suicide and depression I hope it gets better from now :))