Reviews for In the Shadows of Death
HeatherLee chapter 18 . 2/6/2008
i liked this piece and the overall story that you have here. i do think that it could have easily been longer. im not saying that you need to make this into a full length book or anything but there are definitely places where you could have elaborated instead of rushing it. good descriptions but i think you need to go into Koryns character a little more along with Thomas'. i feel like the only character i knew really well was Jegra.
MeredithBlueEyes chapter 18 . 7/3/2005
That was a really awesome piece of work! I enjoyed reading it very much. You had great description, yet didn't over-describe as many fall victim to doing. Great job! ~Emerald :)
RubyElf chapter 2 . 12/24/2004
I admire your writing. You have a way with words and the first couple paragraphs were almost poetic. Keep up the good work! ;)
Ookami no Kiba chapter 18 . 9/17/2004
Amazing...sequel? maybe she and he get more powerful?
IrishVampire13 chapter 18 . 2/23/2004 this the end of it? Because that is something I thought I'd never see. I'm kidding, hehe. Great job!
I am Gone chapter 16 . 9/19/2003
Very good quite excelent.
Devi Lethe chapter 16 . 8/13/2003
You're like my Raisin died and my spork broke or I'd set them both on your for making us wait so long.

On a happy note, I enjoyed it. It reminds me very much so of In the Forests of the Night. I await the next chapter. No threats this time.
IrishVampire13 chapter 16 . 6/23/2003
*stares* You finally updated! I was beginning to think I'd never get to see how it ends. I'd forgotten how good this story is. Keep it up, lass. Peace!
dead-rose chapter 16 . 6/18/2003
that story was so awsome! you really have to finish it.
poor-ophelia chapter 16 . 6/17/2003
ya know I love it girl. go thomas! make him live and make him and kory get together. love the writing, it's beautiful, but you already know that...anyways, good luck on your exams and stuff!
Werecat99 chapter 2 . 1/28/2003
That was brilliant! I escpecially liked how you introduce to the reader the fact that your main character is a vampire. I really enjoyed it.
lynx wings chapter 6 . 12/8/2002
Sorry. Wrong book title. In the FORESTS of the night. Forests, not shadows. Good story.
lynx wings chapter 5 . 12/8/2002
This story is really good. The only thing is that it is ALOT like In the Shadows of the Night so far. Risika is 300 years old, and Diana lies about it. Risika loves Tora the tiger, and Diana has Torquen. There's even the death-to-the-vamp-who made-me-a-vampire thing. If you've never read the book, this is just to let you know.
lynx wings chapter 2 . 12/1/2002
This is sooooooo good. I love vampires! *continues reading*
I'mnolongerhereatthisaccount chapter 15 . 9/29/2002
Hay there.

It's nice to see that you write so for reviwing "The Shadow of Love".Take your time in reading the other one.I hope that you will enjoy it care.(-:
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