|Reviews for Guardians of Terra Series I: Vanguard|
| RaniMarcella chapter 1 . 1/1
Hey there, wanted to leave a review for ya! I gotta say, I am loving the world and lore you have made up. Definitely unique and interesting. And so far, the characters are pretty interesting and fun to read about as well.
However, I would definitely work on the beginning. It's nothing but an exposition dump. You just pretty much straight up dropped all this background info on the reader before getting to the current story. Exposition dumps are lazy and uncreative ways to introduce someone to a world. I would suggest a different technique, like revealing through dialogue or character motivations/histories.
Anyways, that just my thoughts for you. Keep up the good work!