|Reviews for Dance|
| Aizen Arengh chapter 1 . 1/2/2017
It's somewhat rebelling, but that's your style of writing and I respect that.
In the first line of the first stanza, I think that you mistaking typed "beaI" instead of "beat". So, I would appreciate if you could correct.
There are a few grammatical errors here-and-there, but then again, rules are meant to be broken and poets have been tweaking and bending the rules of grammar since the beginning. So, I would say - GOOD JOB :)