Reviews for Untitled
Guest chapter 2 . 3/18
nice m8
Guest chapter 1 . 3/18
This chapter is amazing
Guest chapter 4 . 2/5/2017
Nice cliffhanger ending, very suspenseful! You write action very well!
anon chapter 1 . 1/20/2017
I like the way you write the young people/novice mancers' personalities and interactions, it gives the story a wholesome but still adventurous 'Young Adult' novel feel to it. And good job writing the danger and carnage of the situations, the tense atmosphere works well to keep suspense running.
Valaintmagnum chapter 1 . 1/4/2017
nice, finish please
DualBringer chapter 1 . 1/3/2017
I like your first chapter. I can't wait to look what the story is going to be.