|Reviews for Untitled|
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/18
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/18
This chapter is amazing
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/5/2017
Nice cliffhanger ending, very suspenseful! You write action very well!
| anon chapter 1 . 1/20/2017
I like the way you write the young people/novice mancers' personalities and interactions, it gives the story a wholesome but still adventurous 'Young Adult' novel feel to it. And good job writing the danger and carnage of the situations, the tense atmosphere works well to keep suspense running.
| Valaintmagnum chapter 1 . 1/4/2017
nice, finish please
| DualBringer chapter 1 . 1/3/2017
I like your first chapter. I can't wait to look what the story is going to be.