|Reviews for The 53rd First Sentence|
| VSPHelix chapter 1 . 2/21/2017
Interesting premise! I like how you switch between philosophical musings over story structure and the storyline about the young man. It gives the whole piece a nice depth. One thing, though (it seems like a formatting glitch): every paragraph starts with 'p class"MsoNormal" /p' and ends with '/p'. I'm not sure if you noticed, but I'm guessing that's probably not intentional...?