Reviews for Ashura: a World of Swords and Magic
lirianstar chapter 2 . 1/12
hahaha XD

This chapter was so funny! Gives me the 1/2 Prince kind of feelings!

Love the 1st person narration, it's pretty descriptive, chill and super engaging as well.

Will read on!
Asphalt chapter 14 . 12/20/2017
This story is great. I love it.

I can see the party growing nicely and the trails the team go through.

I also love the team dynamic: Akio: Leader and warrior Human, Keya: Companion and Mage (Possible love-interest) Royal and Elf, Hilda: Companion and Blacksmith/fighter (Possible love-interest) [Tsundere] Dwarf, Leni: New ally and possible scout and stealth expert Halfling

Possible additions to the party: Another male who can be a love rival for Keya or love-interest for Leni if she joins [Possible class, Knight and protector of the hero],
A Yandere girl who wants to kill all those who oppose her hero (imply to also kill Keya and Hilda if they get too close to Akio)

just some suggestions
lirianstar chapter 1 . 12/16/2017
I really enjoyed this! Looking forward to more.
Keita123 chapter 7 . 4/19/2017
Ha, quite a hilarious chapter we have here.

I like the old man. Had been expecting him to be the usual old pervert.
Keita123 chapter 2 . 4/19/2017
Aaw, their interaction is cute. I'm jealous lol
Keita123 chapter 1 . 4/19/2017
So far so good! I'm already growing fond of the heroine!

And it's kinda a hilarious role reversal with her peeking at him changing!
Lightning Berserker chapter 4 . 1/27/2017
I like this story, I hope you update soon.