Reviews for One Lick
Zukafu Chiriamoto chapter 1 . 1/17/2017
Kudos, you created some decent smut that didn't make me cringe and die inside.

There were a few missing capitals on the name 'Conner' towards the end, as well as a tense error, "...stopped moving completely and just [laid] there"; otherwise I had little else to critique.

Good job.
~ Zukfafu