Reviews for Alliteration
Woedin chapter 1 . 3/8/2018
What a different, and thought provoking idea, and method. I truly found this offering as a whole surreal. As I read this, each line seemed to contrast with my own personal memories, sometimes connecting with only one word, and other times the entire line would unleash my own recollections of people, places, events, or experiences in a cascade of disconnected thoughts, which was pretty trippy. I suppose your line I connected most with, was "Nests of sailors talk, and laugh" The cool thing is, this works randomness can make it personal for each reader. I find this very interesting, and wonder of the possibilities of replicating something like this, in the form of a poem?