Reviews for Yellow
LorrahBear chapter 1 . 1/30/2017
Already, it's got quite the creepy vibe going for it! She should call the cops - isn't that what people do when a random child shows up in a field? Or is this not a modern story? If so, something to communicate the general era would be helpful - horse and carriage perhaps? Telegrams?

I did notice some tense swapping from present to past, especially in the first few paragraphs, but with a little extra proofreading, that is an easy fix.

Well done. I look forward to the rest!