|Reviews for Demon Potentate|
| pastryninja chapter 1 . 2/8/2017
Dark and foreboding. I like the ending because it shows the worst is yet to come. I would have liked more details about the terror and destruction the villain causes though.
| Zukafu Chiriamoto chapter 1 . 2/1/2017
This feels very much like the prologue to a bigger, wider story... There's so much I want to know about this battle and these implied characters you've set up!
There is a really immersive atmosphere to this that builds in such little time and a range of emotions. I really enjoyed this - brought a little thrill to my evening.
All the best,