Reviews for The Love Scene
JDFly chapter 3 . 5/6/2017
I just thought of an additional comment to make on the previous review. When parents, other teachers, and the principal see a performance of this play, Ms Swenson will soon find herself looking for another teaching position in a different state. I'll admit I haven't been to, or in, a high school play recently, but I doubt if the sex scene would meet with school board approval. Ha-ha.
JDFly chapter 4 . 5/5/2017
Another good little story by my fave short story writer.
Zukafu Chiriamoto chapter 4 . 2/4/2017
Well well well, method acting is a powerful theatrical tool - I think this piece is a sound example of why!

I got hooked in by the premise but it was your delivery that very much kept me until the end. The balance between enough, substantial description and excessive amounts of graphic details was good. I didn't feel like I was reading something pornographic but there was some imagery for the purpose of the story. Also, I loved the ending where the underwear is brought back up again. I thought it was a lovely little comic note on finish on.

I really enjoyed this!
~ Zukafu
shinju asuka chapter 4 . 1/31/2017
I think the way you write their character name and their own name together is summarized nicely on your summary! :Db it makes me wondering too whether they acted as themselves or their characters.