Reviews for Fading
Black Blank Page chapter 1 . 12/29/2018
Sometimes, love can be painful
Synthey chapter 1 . 6/23/2018
This is really well written, very sad too, but I like when people can write sad things, great job!
The Voice Of Silence chapter 1 . 2/2/2018
Okay, this one I feel qualified to judge, since it has some rhymes to it. I have to say, while I would still consider it prose poetry, because there is no definite rhyming pattern, but that doesn't matter. Because most of your lines that do rhyme are very loosely rhyming words (I like to call them almost rhyming words), it gives it that indescribable kind of flow that rhyming poems have, while still sounding casual, like a prose poem. All in all, it's a nice effect that I think sounds rather nice.
XXXDISCONTINUEDXXX chapter 1 . 2/12/2017
How sad...
BradytheJust chapter 1 . 2/11/2017
Absolutely heartbreaking Zukafu.

Every single line, especially the last stanza was perfection and really spoke to my heart. I've been dealing with a situation similar to this with an old friend and even though I've changed, she's still a "Pleasant but fading dream"

This is some of your best work yet, and you have made me cry :')

Keep on writing!
CMfan5000 chapter 1 . 2/10/2017
A summary of almost every romantic story. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.