Sometimes, love can be painful

This is really well written, very sad too, but I like when people can write sad things, great job!

Okay, this one I feel qualified to judge, since it has some rhymes to it. I have to say, while I would still consider it prose poetry, because there is no definite rhyming pattern, but that doesn't matter. Because most of your lines that do rhyme are very loosely rhyming words (I like to call them almost rhyming words), it gives it that indescribable kind of flow that rhyming poems have, while still sounding casual, like a prose poem. All in all, it's a nice effect that I think sounds rather nice.

How sad...

Absolutely heartbreaking Zukafu.

Every single line, especially the last stanza was perfection and really spoke to my heart. I've been dealing with a situation similar to this with an old friend and even though I've changed, she's still a "Pleasant but fading dream"

This is some of your best work yet, and you have made me cry :')

Keep on writing!

A summary of almost every romantic story. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.