Reviews for Lunar Eclipse
The Voice Of Silence chapter 4 . 1/3
Understandably, not understandibly. Defectuous, not defectous. Blatantly, not batlantly. I feel . . . something. Or maybe it's nothing. Fix the typos if you want, I guess. I stopped pointing them out after a bit. Didn't feel like it anymore. I need to go distract myself for a while.
The Voice Of Silence chapter 2 . 1/3
Scraped his eardrums, not scrapped. Huh, not hu. Momentaneous, not momentanous. Whatever, not wathever. Maybe change it to staying pinched, no, actually, just remove staying. Since you never said when he started, you are introducing the fact that he is pinching the bridge of his nose, not enforcing it. disappoint, not dissapoint. Again, I am in awe of this writing. I don't really feel like banter right now, sorry.
The Voice Of Silence chapter 1 . 1/3
Hypocrite. Not hypocrit. I have literally no words to describe how much some of this applies to me, but I haven't fallen as far as Davi and, frankly, I hope I never lose what has kept me from doing so.