Reviews for Chosen |
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![]() ![]() Hope this will be continued! |
![]() ![]() Great start, I'm captivated. |
![]() ![]() You two continue to impress. The pacing of this story is amazing and I can’t wait for more! |
![]() ![]() I love this story! I wish updates came a bit faster though.I get really into it but then have to wait months to read more. It's hard to remember what happened before or to get into the flow of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! What a great chapter. I somehow missed that this story had been updated, apologies I'm late to the party! I really love this story - it's interesting how things are developing. I can't wait to see what happens between Edan and Dom once they're back and settled. And that ending! Hoping Edan manages to get out of this one without getting too hurt. |
![]() ![]() This is a great story! Just realized it updated and I’m so happy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I've read the last chapter 3 times already. (Obsessd much?) Made an account! (Deepa of the long obsessed reviews.) And now I will get alerts when you update! Theory! Is Harold the orphan boy's abusive uncle? Because I'm already disgusted by him, and I really REALLY hope I get to see more of that small adorable boy. And that thought struck me on my second read through. |
![]() ![]() The update was SUCH A PLEASANT SURPRISE after the day I'd had! AND I JUST WANT TO SAY THANK YOU! Maybe I'll make an account just so I can put this story on alerts. I'd had just about two episodes of serious muscle cramps and they were, absolutely, most definitely, NOT pleasant. I sympathies with Edan. And oh no hon, do NOT try to plan to run away... that is NOT gonna end well... for you anyway. I sure am gonna enjoy your punishment. As well as Dominik. Poor baby, scared out of his mind, but I like you all terrified and scared and obedient and under Dom. It's just so hot. *shivers in delight* Yeah I'm twisted. Harold is creepy, let's see what he does to Edan before Dom comes to his rescue and surprises even himself at the protectiveness he feels over "just a pet" because that what Edan is, right? *suggestive wink at Dom* Just wanna say thank you for the update again and I love your writing so so so so so much! Keep thriving! Hope the next update is soon! (I'm selfish, I'm so sorry.) |
![]() ![]() YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY I WAS TO SEE THE UPDATE No complains I really pity Edan for his situation with Dom here and all but he seemed really Bratty when he said those things about being smart and all, because frankly, yeah. Dominik WAS right when he said all those things. And I like GAVIN! and I'm pretty sure Dom doesn't know about the abuse of that smol boy we met at the starting of the chapter. I know you updates just recently, like, recently as in it a few days ago. But I hope you UPDATE soon again! Soon as in a few weeks? I know it's too much to ask but I'm literally almost obsesivly invested in the story. LOVED THIS CHAPTER SOOOO MUCH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! So excited to see this story updated. I loved the chapter - Edan is getting braver and though he's still strict, Dominik didn't seem overly harsh. I can't wait to see how their relationship develops. Thanks for updating! I'm looking forward to reading more |
![]() ![]() Was the lady who hung herself Dom' s wife? Was that story about his own family? I'm sure he's had a lot of trauma in his own life, not that it excuses his actions, but I'm interested to find out. Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... Only nine chapters? What foolery is this? I wanna smack that man with a giant wet fish. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This series is incredible! Thank you so much for creating such a wonderful and intriguing adventure. I would read an entire novel based on Master Dom and his sweet bunny :) |
![]() ![]() AAAAHHHH. I absolutely love this story so so much and am in a way kinda offended about how little reviews it has? I would think a story like this would at least have 100 reviews. Anyway, I so so love this. Especially how unpredictable Dom is, gentle one second and cruel the next, watching Edan lose his fight slowly is so endearing in a sadistic way. I mean, of course this all isn't right in real life but this is fiction and I am allowed to fangirl. I would have felt bad for I minos but they were about to kill Edan painfully anyway, and they DID only let Dom in to bless his horse because he offered money. And Dom's story is obviously true. Kethel is an interesting character... Ah, I'm imaging a scene where Dom is too harsh to Edan and doesn't realise it until he discovers Kethel secretly trying to help him... ahem. My imaging is always running around. *incoherent screams* I WAS SO SO DISAPPOINTED WHEN I FOUND IT HAS ONLY 8 CHAPTERS RIGHT NOW. I've already read it twice since discovering it yesterday night, literally. And it isn't even noon yet. Sorry for the long ass review, but please please please pleaaaasssseeeee update soon, this is gonna be one of the very few things which I'm looking forward to in my life right now. And in the meanwhile, its time for another reread. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you can update soon! I love this story so far. |