|Reviews for Legacy|
| madamasharpless24601 chapter 1 . 2/23/2017
Oh my God... *cries*. As a high school senior with three months left of school to go, this really hits home. The way you described walking the halls felt so familiar, and I just realized that soon I'll be leaving that sort of...familiar space... :'(
A few tips, though: I feel like "thread these halls" may not be the best word; maybe "tread" would be better? I don't know, just my opinion. And at the end of the second stanza, "I will" might make more sense than "will I". It's your poem, though, and I don't want to take that from you. Those little things just jumped out at me. :)
Lastly, I loved the "far and uncertain" bit. The idea of going off to college is quite daunting...