Reviews for Bloodfire: Other Realm, Frost Family Series Book 2
Realstar chapter 8 . 9/25/2017
Thank God she finally got her memory back.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/24/2017
My goodness you are amazing. This is awesome.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/24/2017
I am guessing that Kelly is Nisha, Lily is Sera, Derek is Jacob and Felix is Nisha and Jacobs baby.
HelloBeautifulChild chapter 33 . 6/19/2017
Ahhhh! What? It's over? But? But? No- it- goddamn it.


I wish your writing weren't so good, this torture is just cruel.

:) Thanks for writing, I look forward to Secret Heart. (Hopefully it's completed too!)
HelloBeautifulChild chapter 32 . 6/19/2017
Okay so the Death God is cool, I just have to say. I feel like he's worthy of his own story, you know? Another series separate of this one.

Brennan has a lot ahead of him, but how are things with Nisha and Jack? Is that storyline abandoned? Noooooo!

Once again a great chapter!
HelloBeautifulChild chapter 31 . 6/19/2017
I am glad that the whole Oberon Fae thing didn't play out in the sense that Nisha fell for him and was kidnapped. It's very cliche, and I feel overused in stories such as these.

I'm hopeful that Bren will mellow Freddy, and Freddy will mature Bren. They seem to be good for each other, which is nice considering they'll probably spend a lot of time together.
HelloBeautifulChild chapter 30 . 6/19/2017
I have a feeling that Sera had decided to call him dad anyway, but wanted Bren to go to her school.

They'll end up together, I just know it, but what about Nisha and Jack? I feel like their relationship has taken a break from the 'screen'. I get it, but I am still interested in their progression.

Wonderful chapter!
HelloBeautifulChild chapter 29 . 6/19/2017
Oh Bren, trying to pull hootananny. Silly silly child. :)

I love that Jack is already telling the kids to not demand things of Bren, without telling them that he *has to* do what they say. It's a kind thing to do.
HelloBeautifulChild chapter 28 . 6/19/2017
Aweh, such a sweet moment between them!

I will say I'm kinda annoyed by how everyone (Nisha as well) is treating her kidnapping. That's what is is, really. She was kidnapped and drugged- yes she thought she loved him but that doesn't mean she wasn't drugged. She was the victim, and no one seems to be realizing it in those terms.

Still an amazing story. :)
HelloBeautifulChild chapter 27 . 6/19/2017
Hello again! This chapter was amazing! Bren cracking like he did- it was both shocking and believable. Also, now I'm so excited to see him and Sera together! I have no idea what type of adult she'll turn into, but I'm certain you'll make her relationship with him believable and something I love.

Wonderful chapter, thanks again for writing. :)

(Also, I know I disappeared over the weekend, I mostly read during the week.)
HelloBeautifulChild chapter 26 . 6/16/2017
I feel for Bren, he shouldn't have to give up his free will. It sucks, and it's terrible. Yes, he should be grateful to Jack, but I hope Jack doesn't expect that he owns him now. People shouldn't own people.
HelloBeautifulChild chapter 25 . 6/16/2017
I will say that your transition from romance to fantasy/really mature themes was done really well. I don't feel like Nisha pretending to be his sex slave is super shocking, it doesn't seem like a chapter from another book shoved into this one.

Also, if anyone was paying any attention they'd know that Nisha wasn't actually doing anything because her head wasn't bobbing, unless there is some perfectly still bj technique I haven't learned about...
HelloBeautifulChild chapter 21 . 6/16/2017
4 more reviews? I can absolutely do that! Assuming I stop skipping the review box in favor of reading the next chapter *immediately*.

I'll have to think about the special chapter, not sure I want to mess up your writing process... I'm glad you like my reviews and are feeling better, :).

I really hadn't noticed it until the last few chapters, but Jack does curse a lot, omg. I really hope he and Nisha get back together, like together together not the friends/co-parents together they are now. I'm really worried about Fae though... We shall see!
HelloBeautifulChild chapter 12 . 6/16/2017
Damnit and things were going so well.
HelloBeautifulChild chapter 4 . 6/15/2017
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