I WAS UPSET WITH YOU FOR CHANGING THE STORY BUT NOW I AM UPSET WITH JACOB! HOW COULD HE?! WHAT IS HIS PROBLEM?!

Fantastic chapter, as always. :)

Soooo intriguing! I bet the kid is Aiden, if Bren was supposed to protect him. This story was certainly a rollercoaster; it felt very natural and flowing, like the characters were developing of their own accord. Can't wait to get stuck into Secret Heart!

Jack at the beginning, lol. I can see how he'd get a little annoying to actually live with.
Ooh, does the Death God get a scar every time he kills someone? Just an idea ;-)
Wow, that was Oberon/Tatty dealt with quickly, especially considering all the hassle he/she caused! And I'm glad to hear about Nisha's HRD project again, be interesting to see what happens.

I like Freddy, how he's snippy and yet vulnerable at the same time. I hope Bren cracks him in the end.
You sure know how to write a cliff-hanger! The Death God - dun-dun-duuuu!

OMG what an ending... I'm so curious to find out more!

I am actually scratching my head... WTF? That just went from ooo to bleh the end! What the heeeeeee! I'm seriously confused! That good cuz now I want to go read Secret Heart

Ok I want to say is that it with Oberon but I know you so I kinda feel like you are leaving something unanswered...it's killing me!

Love this chapter though. Oh my god so freaking funny! I love Kazuo!

Sooooooo I decided to sneak in a chapter before my run... oh my god. Oh I'm so excited! The death god? Like a shinigami? And poor Freddy and Bren. Those two are like two little sweet peas in a pod haha it's cute.

5 books about the Frosts? I'm soooo excited! Hope you get round to writing them all!
This chapter's so sweet! I loved how nervous Jack was of scaring her away. And Sera's a chip off the old block, making deals already!
I'm really pleased they've finally turned a corner; can't wait to see how their relationship develops further :-)

Oh and there it is; the father/daughter bonding. I can't help but love those two!

Week this was short but soooo sweet well it wasn't major short but short for you! I loved it ! I love Sera and I can't wait for her story.

This is cry worthy of a choapter it makes me that happy love love
Love love love love looooofe it! :)

Yay, I love the fact that Nisha and Jack are beginning to settle down like a happyish married couple. And Aiden's so sweet; you can see the obvious signs of Jack in him, but then he's kind and considerate like Nisha. I'm also really looking forwards to seeing what you do with the protest against the HRD, how that's going to pan out.
That was a clever bit where Sera 'ordered' him to cry, but then I'm not sure I like the idea of him only loving Sera because she told him too. I know he sort-of does love her anyway, but I hope it will all make good in the end.

I'm still here! I'm glad they rescued Bren. Now I'm curious as to where things will go, you are not predictable, lol.

I honestly don't know how to react to this chapter. I'm full of mixed emotions. Good mixed emotion. It I'm kinda sad as well it's seemed like a sad chapter. I love the jack and Bren scene in the bedroom and the comment it being some man shit just made me cry with laughing. Last nights conversation came back tonne and it was all I could think of... haha

Really good chapter :)

I'm still here, alive and kicking :) sorry I didn't review the last chapters. Life was hectic... You sure do know how to keep us all wanting for more :) I feel for Brennan, I just hope he will find some peace in the near future. As for Sera I'm still hoping for a father/daughter bonding time ;) love it that Jack and Nisha are growing closer and closer. Till next time!