I love how much Jack's matured, and like you said, he's not being his usual a*****e self. And they're so shy around each other; they're like children, reaching out to one another. When they were holding hands and fell asleep holding each other - it gave me a happy feeling! Thank you for getting them back together :-)

Week! Yay jack! Yay Nisha. Was it me or was that shorter than normal? Or it's just so early I read it faster. Not kidding it's not 5.20 am I started at 5. Why cuz ping I'm awake... I'm seeiously getting sick of this waking up at 5 things it's annoying. I'm going to write some MUMB while I have a spare couple hours.

Back to the chapter... ''tis was super cute! I love. Probably my favourite chapter yet. It's sooo cute! Haha

Whoa, my head's spinning after all that! It's like Bren's become like winter itself, cold and locked away. I hope he doesn't end up completely bitter and loveless.
Can't help feeling Nisha's taken a bit of a backseat. Like, Bren's completely taken over the story! Maybe she and Sera will come to the forefront a bit more, especially now Bren needs Sera to make him better again. I loved all that detail about the Seasons and how the Soul Witches and the other monsters came about :-)

I'm really intrigued as to what sort of magic Megan has. And she doesn't seem to be from the Other world, as she hadn't heard of Jack. I like how she and Sera are sort of being compared against each other, even though she and Bren are purely platonic.
And Jack didn't quite end the façade the first chance he got, he 'had' to keep kissing/mauling Nisha, eh? Must have been a real tough job, lol!
The only bit I couldn't get my head around was how, if Megan and Zach are chained to each other, how did she get in the cage with him on the outside and the chain passing through the bars?

Oooooooo mysterious... haha not really but first word that came to mind. This was grippingly good. I couldn't stop reading. I was hooked so yay you!

5 mill! Woah... I love this chapter! So sweet and weird all at the same time. So good I was like yay jack! I just couldn't wait for been to work it out! Week yay so glad! I also noticed that little bit of reasoning from Bren unknowingly working out things with Oberon even though he doesn't know it's Oberon. Yay him! Yay you!

Really good, really hot chapter. It's really quite hot (in a twisted sort of way) to see Jack acting all nasty and perverted! And he acknowledges how wrong it is to feel like that but still feels it.
That bit with the little girl, Vanessa and her 'mommy' - so sad and sinister at the same time. Is the woman there to get a replacement for Vanessa when she's no longer a little girl? And when mommy says 'I love you too' - the little girl never actually said she loved her to start with.
And Jack just happened to have that outfit lying around for Nisha to wear, huh? ;-)

I am sooooo sorry for being absent lately. I have over hermutised my self to a point where even writing is almost impossible.
This seemed like a short chapter but intesting at least. That kiss was hooooooot

Who is Megan?! So she has green eyes (like Quilo?) and she's connected to some sort of shadow-twin.
Wow, so the HRD run death camps, like the Nazis. This is super creepy and horrific; they simply don't see humans as, well, 'human', do they? We must be lower than animals to them.
Oh crumbs, just had a horrible thought. You say humans get sold to restaurants - what if when Nisha and Jack went to that fancy restaurant on holiday, they were eating human?
Really good, dark chapter. I'm looking forward to hearing just how much Jack will tell Nisha and how she'll take it.

Megan...? That rings a bell well more like the eyes ringed a bell. Where do I know it from?

Other then that this was good. Sick, twisted and oo so good. Loved. It.

Very dark indeed, Jack calling Nisha a curse haunting him. Bit Heathcliff/Cathy-like.
Another really good, really strong chapter. I like how Nisha's sticking up for herself some more. And Bren... OMG, please get Jack in there to get him out!
I don't think I'd mind Jack caging me against the wall tho ;-)

What the actual fuck!? Like what the hell this whole chapter! Like a complete question like what the actual fuck? Are you trying to kill me? Are you trying to hurt me? Because i am hurt and broken and frantically trying to figure what the freaking hell is going on? Like what the actual hell? My mind is broken with this chapter... you are so freaking mean and a little scary that this came out of your head... I might get you to write MUMB for me haha

Like what the actual fuck... my mind cannot even begin to fathom what you are thinking!

Poo Bren.

That HRD part sounds interesting, and then what Austin thinks - sex slaves and all, crikey!
So is Oberon going to be able to 'reverse' the fact that Nisha can't have any more children?
Quentin's being a bit of an a**e, no change there ;-)
Arrghh - that cliffhanger! Somebody please rescue Bren!

Jack's a bit like Rumpelstilskin, offering all these 'deals' - first to Nisha, now to Bren.
It's so clever and complex, the blood pact details you've laid out. So now we've got another couple to root for, in Sera and Bren!