|Reviews for Family Dilemmas|
| Starre of the Night chapter 1 . 3/5/2017
| anwenwrites chapter 1 . 2/25/2017
Hey, nice story. I thought it gave a nice message about both giving (the girl they adopt as thanks for her kidney) and never giving up. Glad that our Gracie recovers by the end! :)
Two things, though. One, in the sentence, "when she would return home, that's all she would talk about with her parents", "that was all" might be better in keeping with the tenses at the moment. And two, it's "sheer entertainment", not "shear entertainment."
But those are just little things I thought I'd point out. Again, this is really a nice story. I'm curious, what was the prompt that you got in class when you wrote i