Reviews for Short Stories:
Jimli chapter 1 . 6/25/2017
Impactful, very descriptive. In a story so short, make sure not to burden it with physical description.

Intriguing; it really left me wanting more, though. :)

Jimli
CoffeeWritingAddiction chapter 1 . 2/25/2017
The writing is great for how short this is.
I can create an image in my head of what's happening from the way you described everything.
Lovely work.