Reviews for Heroes of the Multiverse
JaDeCe chapter 3 . 3/4/2017
(0o0) jaw drop.

Your story flows nicely, like a movie or a comic book. Hehe, anyway, not bad. And here when I thought I couldn't love Valerie anymore, you gave her the manipulation of electricity. Girl power all day.

I'm ready to find ouy what is really going on.
JaDeCe chapter 2 . 3/3/2017
I liked the character build up. I also enjoyed the outing, reminds me of home. I like it so far, but now I'm ready to see what happened after this. Hopefully they're all alive. On to the next.
FadeToBlackNinja chapter 1 . 2/27/2017
To be honest this chapter establishes characters but it doesn't set up too much. Hopefully things pick up in the next chapter.
Tapp chapter 1 . 2/26/2017
Good introduction of your characters; it's really getting your readers to know them. However, I'm waiting for it to get to the main point of the story, which I hope would be in the next chapter. Keep it up!