|Reviews for Eden of the End|
| Tomoyuki Tanaka chapter 1 . 3/26/2017
...I'm not sure if you can call a guy crazy just because he's saying a line like "aww, who's a good boy? You are! You are!" I mean, for all you know, he could be sarcastic, or he could just be triumphantly gloating over getting his revenge on the dog who probably hurt him in the past.
In other words, there's not enough evidence to show that the guy is truly insane.
Besides that, I think the way you described the girl's situation was fantastic, and I can really feel the tension and stuff. Good job there! Will you be continuing this story? I guess I'll look forward to the next chapter.