Reviews for Beginning of the End
alltheeagles chapter 1 . 3/7/2017
As a one-piece, this holds together with a clear opening-development-climax structure. I can see how it'd fit into a longer saga of the three-sided war. I admit, quite a lot of the strategy floated right over my head, but I think I got the general gist of things. Furry Yakta won over cold-blooded Rethellians and one-eyed Havarigga.

Anyway, I liked the way you incorporated the descriptions of the three races into the narration eg 'his massive paws' and 'as cool as the blood running through her veins'. As for the Havarigga, at first I thought only Fosalin had one eye (some kind of injury), right up until the bit with the tanks. That was a nice detail, though, the fact that they could only use the enemy's weapons but not their vehicles.