|Reviews for The Blanket|
| RainbowPearls chapter 1 . 5/12/2018
Wow! What a nice tale it was! Seriously I doubted a little when Yeod met the wizard under the oak Tree instead but then i thought, maybe it's a tree in the forest.
On the other note, I liked the location of the second brother, SILVER STREAM! WOW!
The camel did help Yeod along with its friends in killing that Wizard! :)
Nice that he got rid of the blanket in the best way and got a new one! :)
| Seudonimo Voldeminty chapter 1 . 11/25/2017
Amazing :) I think the end could be cleared up a little bit - the last sentence doesn't make sense to read. But it was so fun to read.
| BradytheJust chapter 1 . 9/17/2017
Jaya once again you showcase the formula for a fable perfectly.
The blanket was a cool artifact, and definitely, something I would never have thought could hold enough weapons to fuel an army... and scorpions.. ugh!
I pity the soldier who has to fight them, but when you say cause a panic you go all out!
Great story and great fable, and it's always an enjoyment to read your work!