|Reviews for Cloud Place and Bear Man|
| BradytheJust chapter 1 . 1/14/2018
First of all, when a beautiful woman tells you to walk
twenty-six miles, you walk the twenty-six miles!
I loved the idea of a train taking people up to the clouds and then back down, and you also did a good job describing the characters and the connection between the bears and the man.
Wonderful job Jaya.
| RainbowPearls chapter 1 . 12/23/2017
At first, I felt pretty sad for the man, that nobody liked him because of his scars. Nice that he'd a pretty and wise wife. I felt happy knowing that the poor guy had someone good at least. The mythology was making me drown in your shot with curiosity and eagerness.
At last, I felt happy for the man who was finally subjected to some joy!
Simple and interesting!
Good job! :)
| Wildcat227 chapter 1 . 7/12/2017
very interesting. I have always loved stories with spirit animals, and this one was very interesting.
| addledwalrus chapter 1 . 3/25/2017
This was a pretty interesting read and I felt it had an almost mythological feel to it, with the man's transformation into a bear and the mention of a cloud place.
I believe the man's wife was supposed to be an angel of some sort?