|Reviews for I am ready|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2018
Watch your verb tenses!
| PeachesForMe chapter 1 . 3/21/2017
This is nice. The word "breathe" in the third line should be "breath", though. Some of the rhymes seem a little forced, like they were written just for the sake of the rhyme. An example of that would be "I swear it's not an illusion, it's all just as I had visioned". Visioned should be "envisioned" and the line just reads awkwardly. Overall, I like the scene this poem sets. Keep writing, you are great!