|Reviews for Caught!|
| RainbowPearls chapter 1 . 3/25
Aww, such a sweet story. Glad that Sef and Mark found each other.
They were better for each other. Mark had no one in his life and his life is something like nightmare where he had suffered horribly from the start of his life, whereas Sef didn't have anyone better either, and they were better off together.
I idea of burning Mark along was little scary but it worked well undoubtedly. Sef's village people were also very selfish. I hope Sef would find a beautiful girl to marry and have good children like he wanted. And I hope that Mark also finds happiness in his life now.
Glad that the mermaids are gone now.
| BradytheJust chapter 1 . 9/17/2017
I thought for sure Mark was going to die! :O
Villagers being suspicious of magic, but willing to let someone get sacrificed for fish. Well, fish is worth it I suppose. :)
I really liked Sef's gift, especially its weaknesses (Not seeing his own future and it not being accurate.) because it makes the gift more interesting.
Great story as always! :D
| Seudonimo Voldeminty chapter 1 . 9/9/2017
Oh wow, my heart. I thought the kid was going to die. I like the story :) There were a few typos - when the boy introduces himself, it should be "me Mark".