Reviews for Whatever happened to Captain Kenway? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully written my friend. Toughing, exhilarating, sad, and just all around beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eulogies are always such sad things... but you managed not to make Kenway's too sad. It was almost happy in a way, a celebration of the extraordinary man. The only suggestion I have is to make the various parts sound different ie in their own words, cause that would make the characters come alive. I liked Coral very much, and I'm glad that Muse has a friend to help her over her sadness. P.S. I only just realised what Kenway's first name is. Ooooohhhhhhh! |