Reviews for Siphon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! |
![]() ![]() The format is super weird - short chapter though :( Glad to hear back after a long time! :D I can't wait to read more about their adventures 3 love this story |
![]() ![]() This is such a good story please keep going |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh! This is such a good story! I love it so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this chapter because we were bring shown not told through most of it. We were with her as she processed her thoughts and actions and as things were happening. Sometimes we are told after the fact or told more rather than shown. So this chapter was very nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad for the update. Looking forward to the reunion! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, okay. You go girl! She needs to figure out how to stop these people! Also can't wait for the reunion |
![]() ![]() Yassss there's the plot twist! Honestly I would've been content with fluffy romance filler chapters but things are getting super interesting! Can't wait for more xo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dang, now we're getting somewhere! |
![]() ![]() ![]() RandomReviewer, I don't know if you'll see this, but thank you for the nudge to post more chapters. Please message me so I can properly thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So excited for where this story is going now. I just love your characters. I also think your flashback scene was very well done. It can be incredibly hard to write from a child's perspective. You did so wonderfully. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what even just happened did everyone else understand what was going on or am I just dumb |
![]() ![]() Come on up and at 'um, it's time to get up smell the roses and write the next chapter, preferably before I go insane without it. Do you want me to go insane? Or maybe you went insane and are in a padded cell in an insane asylum. If so that's cool as long as you can still update there are no excuses. Unless you're dead... please don't be dead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have enjoyed and am still enjoying getting to know the characters. However, with 17 chapters of the story done, I still don't know what the plot is. This story hints at one many times, and has such potential for one. You've created loveable characters and a strong starting point/concept and I think it could really go places. Right now it just feels a little directionless. Maybe if you ever do a rewrite, start to add more plot throughout the beginning, and i think the two falling in love while dealing with what ever other actions happening would make their love stronger and more organic. However i do like their friendship and many of the small scenes they have together. I hope this isn't coming out as harsh, because I've very much have been entertained by your story. |