Reviews for Fur and Silver (Revised edition)
alltheeagles chapter 2 . 4/14/2017
Not much change that I can see, but I have a question this time: why two hours? Surely not out of the kindness of Necro's heart, since he's supposed to be the villain? Maybe you could come up with a reason for that, like something expires in two hours, or somebody comes of age, or that kind of thing? Anyway, l like that Julia isn't completely defenseless, she has magic too, only she can't use it temporarily.
alltheeagles chapter 1 . 4/13/2017
You've made the two characters much more distinct and easier to tell apart - good job! One bit that feels a little out of place is the 'From what I hear' sentence because this is in third person throughout, so shouldn't it be 'He'd heard that werewolves...'?
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