|Reviews for Leather|
| AbyssScript chapter 1 . 4/19/2017
Wow. I like it so far. The characters are entertaining, the plot developing nicely, and the humour is quite engaging. I like how you teleport them to Canada; I don't see that kind of choice too often. If there is any complaint I have, it's that the end of the chapter didn't really feel like an end. I'm left feeling like there's a cut-off in the midst of a conversation, which isn't quite what a chapter conclusion is meant to do. Yes, it's supposed to leave the reader wanting to turn the page, but it also has to make sense as well. That's just my thought though. Like I said, your story is off to a really good start. I'm looking forward to seeing more of the connection between the two bounty hunters.
Thank you for the read and I'll check back in once the new chapter's out.